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Reworking scene 5

I'm still reworking scene 5, so that not only is Rosie present, but she actually exists and does her stuff in that scene. My first rewrite left her mostly as a bump on a log. Definitely not Rosie's style.

Also, after reading a posting by exsanguinated, I decided to include moments from my own grieving experiences of which I'm not proud. Like the middle-of-the-night when I was all alone thoughts. But as my character is supposed to be going through this as well, including those thoughts should help more to show her grief.

But it's scarey to actually write out that part of the scene. I keep hoping that even after I write it, the first person who reads that chapter won't find that part of the scene adds anything, so I can just cut it right back out again.
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