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Reminder for edits

Reviewing my outline for Mysterious Paris reminded me that some of the new subplot elements weren't fully integrated into the book. Here's what I need to do:

  • Merge Pinot and Galinha. This would give Manon better motivation for investigating the crime scene. Also, I can add a conversation to make more clear what happened with Rosie.
  • Add a scene (or reference to a scene) where Manon reports the theft of her necklace. Does she escalate it up? She should be upset for a while.
  • Make sure the theft of the necklace is resolved. And how does that affect everyone? I did some work on this, but need to do more.


I also need to find places for those remaining snippets from the deleted scenes. And make sure I've dealt with all of ficbot's comments.
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