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More work on the opening

So, today I went downtown to a group writing session and worked more on the opening to Mysterious Paris. Being away from my desk, I couldn't do the typical editing requiring a full-screen computer. Instead I was limited to what is possible on my little Palm+keyboard setup.

So, I took a copy of Beginnings, Middles & Ends (by Nancy Kress) with me, and did some exercises for improving the beginning. I also re-read the three chapters on beginnings and made little edits throughout the first scene.
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