October 24th, 2006

mysteriousparis

Fine-tuning

I only left myself a little time to work on Mysterious Paris today. I'm fine-tuning per comments from writers in my critique group. One of the women has great suggestions about language.
mysteriousparis

Editing per critique comments

At least one of the writers in my writing group gave really useful feedback on the revised first chapter of Mysterious Paris. Some were questions and sugguestions on wording and grammar.... but some were larger questions that I really had to think about.