September 19th, 2006

mysteriousparis

Typing in the edits

I finished putting variants of the original first two scenes back into the opening of Mysterious Paris. The opening scene from the first two drafts is now the third scene - but not starting a chapter, I don't have the ridiculousness of Manon reading a novel at the opera.

The only dance left in this scene is to deal with her previous encounter with Thierry. And then I can type away as planned. I'm hoping to make significant progress over the next two nights, so I can give a chunk to my critique group.