Thierry is no longer amnesiac about his cell phone. But I still need to adjust some scenes to fit the new reality.
For real, this time. Now that Thierry remembered to use his cell phone (duh!), I fixed up all the stuff about Manon and he running to the police station. I also fixed a really bad line.
Next up: type in the pen-and-paper revisions, while fixing stuff along the way.