January 14th, 2006

mysteriousparis

So what happens now?

While Manon is suffering her crisis, I am worrying that the post-revelation scene doesn't hold up. The pacing feels off, and it feels like I tried to stuff all sorts of reactions into it, but it doesn't ring true.

Maybe instead of revising this scene, I should just write it fresh, and figure out after if I need any of the plethora of info nuggets.

Days on track: 13
Days missed count: 2
Days no writing/revising: 2
Currently reading: The Constant Gardener