March 4th, 2004

mysteriousparis

Back to chapter 1

At last night's Edit_This meeting, ficbot gave me feedback on my first chapter. It was interesting to hear her take on my characters.

Unfortunately, I'm going to have to go back and edit chapter 1 a bit. A character who is supposed to be fairly young seemed like a stuffy old man of 50. *sigh* He is supposed to seem stuffy, but not old.

In my first rewrite of the opening, I cut a scene that shows one of Manon's good points. I should probably find a way to work it back in, as ficbot found the character a bit annoying.
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