I got back critiques from everyone in my writing group on "I am Brave" and have revised. It feel ready to send. But I'll give it another day. Especially as my ISP's DNS no longer seems able to find http://www.thefirstline.com. This is quite disturbing, as I was planning on submitting electronically. I'm hoping that tomorrow everything works properly.

Other items left for October:
* Create index cards for all 54 scenes of Starved. (First must purchase additional index cards.)

* Go through one more set of critique comments on the first chapter of Mysterious Paris.