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Blazing along

Well, maybe not blazing, but faster than my minimal daily quota. I revised 3 pages today, but mostly because I crossed out two pages and part of a third. The buddhist meditation scene is now reduced to its essence. But there's too much deleting and rewriting to read it smoothly. I'll have to make further edits when I'm typing this scene up.

I think the next scene is about to get the hatchet job, as well. Sure Thierry and Manon are interested in what they're discussing, but does it really have anything to do with the story? I may turn most into a long descriptive paragraph with conversation topics threaded through, and then breaking into dialogue when the lines are interesting.

BTW, other writers may want to check out the new community plottingfiction

Days on track: 16
Days missed count: 2
Days no writing/revising: 2
Currently reading: The Constant Gardener
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