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The end is in sight

Last night I completed the various small revisions, as suggested by my critique partners (except for the final restaurant scene).

Tonight I have the big work of merging two bimbos. I think Jelli can handle the stuff I gave Trish. Then (maybe tomorrow? or while I'm merging?) I have to do a better job of differentiating Valerie and Barb. Probably a bit of physical description on Valerie and a bit more personality to Barb will do the trick.

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bunnyhero
Oct. 24th, 2005 05:55 pm (UTC)
"Tonight I have the big work of merging two bimbos."

what a strange sentence :)
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