mmarques (mmarques) wrote,
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And then there were three

My critique partners confirmed what I suspected... that I have to further reduce the number of blonde bimbos to three. What was I thinking before? Seven major characters in a short story?

Unfortunately, I think Trish is gonna have to go. I liked her as the "tough girl" in the bunch, but Jelli's gonna have to pull her weight. Valerie has some of the best lines, and I need Barb to shed tears over Evan.

glacia2000, wanna borrow a character for this year's nano? ;-)
Tags: blonde bimbos on the moon
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