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And then there were three

My critique partners confirmed what I suspected... that I have to further reduce the number of blonde bimbos to three. What was I thinking before? Seven major characters in a short story?

Unfortunately, I think Trish is gonna have to go. I liked her as the "tough girl" in the bunch, but Jelli's gonna have to pull her weight. Valerie has some of the best lines, and I need Barb to shed tears over Evan.

glacia2000, wanna borrow a character for this year's nano? ;-)

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glacia2000
Oct. 24th, 2005 12:20 pm (UTC)
I'd love to borrow a character. Although, I do think I'm writing erotica this year so as long as you don't mind your character being in a dirty book. If not, I can make them the concierge (spelling, spelling monday morning)at the non-tell motel.

Can I have a non-blond bimbo, though?
mmarques
Oct. 25th, 2005 02:27 am (UTC)
Trish can be in a dirty book. All my bimbos (and even the non-bimbo heroine) are blonde.... but she could colour her hair jet black for your book.

Trish wears a lavender form-fitting outfit and thigh-high white boots. She has short hair, and is into weapons of all sorts (blasters, pistols, grenades, whatever it takes to get the job done). Having lived on Moon Base HQ with other women has left her horny, so she's happy to return to Earth to appear in a dirty book.
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