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Started the day with more revisions

This scene in Mysterious Paris was only 1/3 page, but I'm now in a section where "was" and "were" litter the pages. I'm writing entire new paragraphs between the lines of the original, keeping the description, while strengthening the language.

And too much "tell" instead of "show" will help me continue to expand my wordcount. I forsee several expanded scenes written on the backs of pages. I feel like I'm trying to carve a marble sculpture with a spoon. Very slow going, and hard to imagine I'll get to the end.

Will there be any unchanged pages by the time I get to the end of this revision cycle?
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