Some will be relatively easy to implement (improving the language and description of the opera house). But the hard part will be moving a paragraph around. Rearranging the thought flow is tricky. How to start where I want, then transition to this bit and back. Yes, it helps keeps the drama and maybe transitions the Jardin quote scene to Manon's life, but I'm so used to the current flow.
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