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Revised the first chapter, but...

I completed revisions of the first chapter of Mysterious Paris. But then I read part of the chapter at my writers group and received some useful feedback.

Some will be relatively easy to implement (improving the language and description of the opera house). But the hard part will be moving a paragraph around. Rearranging the thought flow is tricky. How to start where I want, then transition to this bit and back. Yes, it helps keeps the drama and maybe transitions the Jardin quote scene to Manon's life, but I'm so used to the current flow.

Revising Mysterious Paris
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