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Wasting time surfing the net

Means that I'm up late revising a page of Mysterious Paris. Why is it that I love this part of the story so much, but hate what I wrote? I keep crossing out swathes, and writing notes to check if there's any good reason to include certain scenes. I want to enjoy the romantic scenes, but I'm not sure they're moving the plot forward.

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baggyk
Jan. 24th, 2006 09:20 am (UTC)
Don't forget that some scenes reveal character instead of advancing the plot. It's also ok just to include something because you like it ;)
mmarques
Feb. 5th, 2006 06:00 am (UTC)
OK, I'm keeping parts of the scene, but am deleting bits and adding others to make it do more work.
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